I felt that the text which was to the left of the model didn't really fit because it didn't stand out much. To solve this problem, I placed a black bar to the right of him so there would be a place for the 'Also Featuring' section. I changed the text to white because the background was black. Another thing I added was a bar running along the bottom of the page which contained additional features of the magazine. I made the 'PLUS!' bigger than the rest of the section so it would catch the readers' eye.
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